live ur lyfe!!!

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    live ur lyfe!!!

    Sum say, I wasn’t destined for greatness,

    An I wouldn’t amount to nothing,

    Y are people so hateful, we all should be grateful.

    Judging a man before you know a man,

    Is a mistake, I cant undersand,

    How can u know so much about me, but nothing about uself,

    Claming to help me, but chu helpless,

    giving me more options to life, wat about yours,

    only u know you, so how come for me, u know so much more,

    I lifted my eyes, to see my life in the futures lights,

    An the ways on your road, were nowhere in sight,

    Now puzzled cuz I feel u lookin out for me, as a peer,

    Lyfe stuck lookin at the headlights like a deer.

    I know wat Im suppose to do, but chu add your too sence,

    Perplexed in a state of being confused.

    Got nothing to gain, but a lot to lose.

    Sum say I wasn’t destined for greatness,

    Thats cuz u hate, spendin ur time on mine,

    Translates in ur time waisted.

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    jademelissa74 commented on live ur lyfe!!!

    02-01-2010

    I appreciate the freestyle, the liquid flow and the piercing message. A good write :))

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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    Faith 2
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    THE REALIEST LOVE!!!! 1
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    NO SORROWS... 1
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    TAKE A RIDE!!!! 1
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    in's and out's 1
    never give up!!! 1
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