live ur lyfe!!!

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    live ur lyfe!!!

    Sum say, I wasn’t destined for greatness,

    An I wouldn’t amount to nothing,

    Y are people so hateful, we all should be grateful.

    Judging a man before you know a man,

    Is a mistake, I cant undersand,

    How can u know so much about me, but nothing about uself,

    Claming to help me, but chu helpless,

    giving me more options to life, wat about yours,

    only u know you, so how come for me, u know so much more,

    I lifted my eyes, to see my life in the futures lights,

    An the ways on your road, were nowhere in sight,

    Now puzzled cuz I feel u lookin out for me, as a peer,

    Lyfe stuck lookin at the headlights like a deer.

    I know wat Im suppose to do, but chu add your too sence,

    Perplexed in a state of being confused.

    Got nothing to gain, but a lot to lose.

    Sum say I wasn’t destined for greatness,

    Thats cuz u hate, spendin ur time on mine,

    Translates in ur time waisted.

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    jademelissa74 commented on live ur lyfe!!!

    02-01-2010

    I appreciate the freestyle, the liquid flow and the piercing message. A good write :))

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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