Rain!!!

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Rain!!!

Rain…

 

Rain poors down my face, as seas wave up in the breeze,

The wind blows all my troubles away, im thankful for 2day.

And so I embrace in the hand that life has dealt me.

I love the way the rain poors down.

Its like the world the is crying for me, expressing the pain,

 That I have felt for so long,

Rain poor down on me, I will not dwell on things that hender me,

For I am a child of  the most HIGH.

So y be high? I wanna fly high, above all the stress, and pain

That holds me, can u hold me lord, protect me, guide  mine eyes,

Cover my ears from argumental sounds,

I love it when the rain poors down…

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DeepEclipse commented on Rain!!!

06-24-2009

"Its like the world is crying for me" same reason I love the rain haha. Well put. Nature itself is not always sunny. Perhaps she needs to cry every now and then also, just like us. I embrace the rain whenever I can. Keep up the writes man.

jademelissa74 commented on Rain!!!

06-23-2009

Inspirational at its best! The powerful words used to compose this tapestry are simply magnificent! Great Job!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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Witch WAy.... 1
Jesus is with you!!! 1
Faith 2
REASONS WHY???? 1
THE REALIEST LOVE!!!! 1
YOU TELL ME POETRY??? 1
wat chu cant see 0
to tha top.... 0
FREE 0
come up... 1
live ur lyfe!!! 1
EYES,CAN SEE. 0
ON THE WAY TO THE TOP... 0
ONLY YOU KNOW YOU.... 3
NO SORROWS... 1
struggles...!
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1
LIVE TO LOVE.... 1
not the only one..... 0
Patience!!! 2
TAKE A RIDE!!!! 1
time... 4
in's and out's 1
never give up!!! 1
lost!!! 4
Self... 2
Rain!!! 2
HeartLess!!!! 1
peace!!! 1
UntiTled... 2
God rules everything around me.!!!! 1
let your heart speak!!! 5
wrong road!!! 5
within!!! 2
it not me!!! 7
the soul. 3
143!!! 2
fight 3
contoll 3
real love!!!! 3
History 2