wondering.

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    wondering.

    I use to think my life was coming to an end.
    And I use to sit and wonder when.
    When true love was going to come my way.
    I would sit and wonder when some one would come
    Some one would say"I love you and I want to spend the rest of my life with you."
    Then it would be just us two.
    The wedding bells would ring.
    The choir would sing.
    And I'd say "I do."
    And he would say it to.And now I wonder no more.
    Cause I found you.
    And you are who my heart is for.

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    optimistic commented on wondering.

    08-08-2009

    This was a good write I like the flow about this poem.

    Chelles commented on wondering.

    08-03-2009

    This is so sweet. I know exactly where you're coming from too. Only my man doesnt want to get married quite yet

    WinterFrost commented on wondering.

    08-03-2009

    Wow... I mean Wow I just can't find any other words Wow.

    Legos12 commented on wondering.

    08-03-2009

    Awww!! So adorable :) This is very cute and complete feeling. Im still in high school so im not sure about the whole marriage thing, but I'm happy for you. I really enjoy the last line, that's a feeling everyone wants to be able to relate to. Well done :)

    Lunesca commented on wondering.

    07-21-2009

    very nice, i cant wait until i find that happyness and closure with my loved one.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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