Now that I'm gone.

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    Now that I'm gone.
    Life is but a memory.
    Darkness is all I see.
    I don't see a white light at the end of my tunnel only darkness.
    What does this mean?
    Does it mean I lost my chance?
    Does it mean the ground is all thats left for me?
    Will my life end like this?
    Will I be missed?
    What will everyone do now that I'm gone?
    Now that I'm gone will everyone be happy?
    Everyone can be happy.
    Now that I'm gone.

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    SaintStoney commented on Now that I'm gone.

    06-27-2009

    I really like this, Short and to the point, I enjoyed this. nice job.
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    hotgirl

    07/03/2009

    I wrote some more poems if you would like to go rate and comment them for me.

    JRata commented on Now that I'm gone.

    01-30-2009

    I like this one its filled with emotion and I can definitely say I've been there.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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