you saved me.

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    you saved me.

     My world was in complete before you.
    My heart was broken in two.
    And now you've come nd mended it.
    And you've made the pieces fit.
    Before you my soul was trapt.
    In an ex-love it was wrapped.
    But now it's free to love again.
    And now a new love is staring to begin.
    And now I feel more free then I ever had.
    Now I'm no longer sad.
    All because you saved me.

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    ef4ort commented on you saved me.

    07-03-2009

    this is a briliiant piece from a brilliant mind of love and intelligence
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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