Creature of the night.

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    Creature of the night.

     What has happened to me?
    The sun burns my skin.
    This just can't be.
    I went to a party.
    I had a few drinks.
    Did I think?
    This guy offered me a ride.
    He took me somewhere.
    We started making out when we got there.
    He bit my neck.
    Then I passed out from losing to much blood.
    Now I'm a wreck.
    I guess I know what I am now.
    I can't eat or drink anything.
    I can't go out in sunlight.
    How do I make this right?
    I am now a creature of the night.

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    stellar commented on Creature of the night.

    09-24-2009

    yeah so funny...this must be inspired by twilight..wish u read my poem too,,thanks
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    optimistic commented on Creature of the night.

    08-08-2009

    This seems to me more like a journal entry, than good start on the process thou.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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