Faithful

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    Faithful

     I sit watching you and wondering what is your name?
    I'm too shy to ask.I guess I am the one to blame.
    I sit and wonder when I do ask will it be to late?
    Or do we belong cause of fate?
    And then one day you walk up to me.
    And tell me your name I guess we were ment to be.
    And as the days go by we get closer.
    And you tell me "I love you."
    I want this to be true.
    And then one day I will walk in my white dress and say I do.
    Because you are the one I will be faithful to.

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    Lunesca commented on Faithful

    07-21-2009

    very nice. i kinda feel this way right now and am hoping it will turn out the same way
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    nu2ya2000 commented on Faithful

    07-04-2009

    AWW. thats a sweet poem. I love how you start it. it makes the reader want to continue readings simply to learn the ending
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    hotgirl

    07/04/2009

    thank you for the comment.please read more.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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