Whispering Wind

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    Whispering Wind

    Count the clouds,
    Watch the cows,
    And listen to the whispering wind.
    It makes up for,
    All the wasted time
    At work that you spend.
    ,
    When you're fed up,
    With all the world,
    All the hate and all the sin.
    When no one gives you love,
    And you're without a friend,

    You can count the cows,
    Watch the clouds,
    And listen to the whispering wind.
    It will make up,
    For all your wasted time,
    Trying to fit in.
    Just listen to the whispering wind.

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    wheelsal commented on Whispering Wind

    07-05-2009

    I like where you went this poem. It also went full circle or bit the tail (I like to call it) with where you were going and were you went. Great job.

    twayneking commented on Whispering Wind

    03-06-2009

    Nice effort. I like the way the text cycles back to the original lines.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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