Hearts & Minds as 1

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    Blues Preacher

    Hearts & Minds as 1

    I often wonder where to start,
    From my head,
    Or from my heart
    And should I relay the whole story
    Of all my Loss
    And All my Glory
    About my stories, will they care
    And will they know that I am there?
    My head tells my heart,"Don't worry."
    If they cant see, it's thier heart, not thier eyes, gone blurry.

    So I write to you this little poem
    To say, If you too write, you're not alone
    and even with the things you say
    If we don't feel the same way
    The most important thing you've done
    Is join or hearts and minds as one.

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    cliftondurant commented on Hearts & Minds as 1

    10-23-2009

    A LOVELY POEM I BEIEIVE YOU MIND AND YOUR HEART SHOULD BE ONE
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    LindasLife commented on Hearts & Minds as 1

    09-30-2009

    Wonderful spoken words.So true about the heart and mind.I'll be back to read more.
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    linlee commented on Hearts & Minds as 1

    07-16-2009

    I just wrote a whole comment, and then my computer threw it away on me. My computer is possessed by a practical jokster, so I guess she wants me to write it better. I, too, was impressed with your line about hearts being blurry rather than eyes. I think that's pretty much what poetry is about - - reading and absorbing from heart to heart. I enjoyed this poem. I have to go now, but I'll be back to read more of your work.
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    optimistic commented on Hearts & Minds as 1

    07-05-2009

    Very simple words of great inspiration to change your hearts and minds you give a lot to unfold so much thru the words so simple in this poem, I like the lines " If they can't see it's their heart, not their eyes gone blurry.
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    laydbak1 commented on Hearts & Minds as 1

    07-05-2009

    How true, how true... There may be always, a different or better way to say it, but that it's said, and that it's felt, is the reason that it's there... A very good write..
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