Blue, Grey, White and Gold

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    This is actually a true story, happened to me in the Mediterranean

    Blue, Grey, White and Gold

    Blue, grey, white haze; Above a golden sea,
    Smooth as ice, weaved like silk;
    Clean and free.
    Great mammal of peace;
    Contently touches the gold,
    To speak to me.

    He speaks of untouched nations,
    Beneath the gold, deep in the sea.
    Where schools of fish, learn of creation
    And sea lions play, in the weeds.

    He speaks to me, about the otter;
    The joyous fun, he makes of water.
    He tells me all about the dolfin,
    And his great love, for the ocean.

    Then, with a tear in his eye,
    The mighty mammal waved goodbye,
    And from his spout, came a spray,
    That I hope,
    Will never fade away...

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    wheelsal commented on Blue, Grey, White and Gold

    06-29-2009

    This is the first poem of yours that I've looked at. Nice job and will get to more soon........................

    BluesPreacher

    07/01/2009

    Yhanks for your comment, all are welcome

    DSLitz commented on Blue, Grey, White and Gold

    05-02-2009

    i am not a huge fan of poems that rhyme, but this one is wonderful.

    BluesPreacher

    06/28/2009

    Thank you D. one of my favs also

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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