When you find that person

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    To find true love is a rare thing, I had to write about it!

    When you find that person

    When you find that person
    No one else is real
    You say "how are you doing?"
    But now you know the deal

    You never give him or her even a second glance
    You would not consider to even take that chance

    If you don't have passion
    Passion real like this
    Say Goodbye forever to
    the Mr. and the Miss

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    Artie commented on When you find that person

    10-18-2009

    How true - there is an art to mingling, flirting, courting, and.... well you get the idea

    dahlusion commented on When you find that person

    09-08-2009

    A straight forward message from (I am sure) a straight forward woman. Bravo!!

    Hampton commented on When you find that person

    09-08-2009

    A simple poem with a clear message that all can understand.. I enjoyed it. Nice write.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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