My best mistake ever

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My best mistake ever

Today I was thinking and taking the time
trying to figure out, my life in it's prime

The mistakes that were made and timing so bad
this point in my life, I feel I've been had

You threw me away without some regret
you watched me take off, in a big silver jet

You never expected for me to do good
but you will be shocked, because I knew I would

At this time, I would like to say thanks
my life is complete, without all the blanks

When I climb to the top and you stay below
remember the day, when I told you so

Ridding of me, you thought you were clever
but me leaving you was, MY BEST MISTAKE EVER!

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PRober commented on My best mistake ever

07-19-2009

now that's a ten babe... great job indeed! Luv it, and write on!

cynthiakehl commented on My best mistake ever

05-18-2009

sweet revenge! gr8

omseattle commented on My best mistake ever

02-23-2009

It happens, no body know when? We should try to watch and care at our level best!!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

MiaH’s Poems (10)

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When you find that person 4
I’ll never forget 1
Love is what I got 2
I feel like HELL 2
The end is near 6
When the going gets tough 2
Make room for the Real Man 3
When it Hurts to Breathe 4
My best mistake ever 4
All good things happen from a bad reason 2