Love is what I got

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    • MiaH
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    To Phil

    Love is what I got

     On days and nights when I am thinking it through
    Where is my life, what am I here to do?
    I smile and I cry without a tear in my eye
    I hate to hear those words like "I tried"

    Give me a break let reality roll
    I am a women and I don't dance on poles
    I'm not your friend, that's not what GOD intends
    Just know that I love you
    But someone's above you

    I have hate in my heart
    But trying to set that apart
    From my poetry and writing
    I'll need a fresh start

    Just the start of this and not the end
    I want to tell you I appreciate you my friend....

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    Hampton commented on Love is what I got

    09-08-2009

    A lovely message to a dear friend with those of us that read and comment as an auduence. Well done.
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    connsk8 commented on Love is what I got

    07-19-2009

    Quite a story, I often think about what my purpose is too, sounds like you have alot going on in your life. I like the way in which you identify yourself as a woman ("I don't dance on poles"!) and how you tell us so much about your life and are honest ("I have hate in my heart") without going into detail and I especially like how you suggest that this is a start of more to come and it intrigues me, I am anxious to read (learn) more...
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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