I feel like HELL

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    I feel like HELL

     I feel like Hell
    No time to dwell
    My mother and father
    were sentenced to hell

    How could you do it?
    My Lord of Lords
    it is unhealthy
    to not sing her chords

    I can't keep going
    Going on like this
    Where will I run to?
    Where is MY Bliss?

    I feel I've been wronged
    But what's it to you
    My life really sucks
    I think I am through

    No time for sorrow
    No time for tears
    I am just praying
    That the end is near

    I have done what I could
    I feel I have danced
    In the Lord's eyes
    I want just one glance

    I could keep going
    But it is too late
    We are all going to face
    Our very last fate..............

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    Artie commented on I feel like HELL

    07-19-2009

    I have felt this many times in life. Each time, I would look back on the previous times, and realize this to shall pass. 10 from me.
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    PRober commented on I feel like HELL

    07-19-2009

    omg! now babe... that's kinda final and dismal, I know you're too pretty to be signing off anytime soon! Nice poem but let's write about something a bit brighter next time! lol!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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