What I See

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    What I See



    Un-breathable beautiful held within you
    Its deeper and darker then you let most go
    There just as the darkest dawn
    You eclipse me soul for a second

    Nothing can seem to touch you at times
    While at others you are just like a leaf on the wind
    Your eyes tell stories your heart not dare speak of
    In your mind there is a tangle forest of dreams worth living

    Your words speak deeply into the soul to those that really listen
    While only tickling the surface of those who can not hear
    You are just as guilty as living in your head as I
    Never thought I would meet anyone that guilty

    In the cool of the darkness secrets are share
    Touches exchanged
    Leaving us both in an upside down world
    Yet we enjoy this twisted passion

    I see what you want, and even what you don’t
    I listen even when you think I am not
    I hear what is not spoken at times
    But just to hold you while you sleep

    Makes you the closest friend
    Circles around we shall stay
    Until the time comes to change
    This is what I see

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    Drivingczar commented on What I See

    04-10-2009

    Cool, cool verses! Nice write!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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