Bloody Raindrops

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    Bloody Raindrops


    Inside the voice screams so long
    It drowns out all that is
    I see red and feel I cant breathe
    Rushing outside I watch the sky
    Clouds of red from
    Chasing laughter as thunder
    Lighting that is black
    Then the sky opens up
    And Bloody raindrops fall

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    maryann72961 commented on Bloody Raindrops

    02-18-2009

    this poem reminds me of a dream that is right on the edge of your memory... I see anger, panic, fear but no solid thing to pin it on Good phrasing and emotion behind the words..needs a little more content
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    SEVEN commented on Bloody Raindrops

    02-18-2009

    whoa......thats heavy don't let it rain on me
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    Bladebearer commented on Bloody Raindrops

    02-18-2009

    Wow. Very dark.
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