Waiting for death.

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    Waiting for death.

    The long shadows bouncing off the walls
    The long black lines of parallel similarity
    That lines my orange flesh
    Sitting beside the window pane
    And looking into the setting sun
    Daring it to blind my stubborn grey eyes.

    I wonder when the train will arrive
    It was due 5 minutes before midnight
    “Ah, here he comes now”
    The wheels looked heavy
    Like they can’t carry anymore weight
    I wonder if their is room for me.

    Screeching to a halt my pulse quickens
    But when he stands at the entry way to the giant machine
    He beckons me to his side
    My first genuine smile opens into a laughing grin.

    It’s an extrondinary feeling; death being so close.

    His eyes pushed deep into his skull
    Rotting skin reveal the bone
    A gruesome sight to any average soul
    But to the unusual ones; his mouth is always smiling
    He bears very contradictory grin.

    I stepped onto the train
    To great him formerly
    He opened his arms and swept my unusual soul
    Into his kind old body
    And looked at me with different eyes
    I knew the moment he looked at me
    With such an understanding
    I felt as though (I believe I knew) I was home.

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    ThatOneChick commented on Waiting for death.

    05-02-2009

    I like it.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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