Autumn sunlight

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    Autumn sunlight

    Dipping low into the autumn sky

    I breathe deeply

    To match the breath taking sight

    For as long as you like lean into me

    Please, ease your mind

    If only I had a key to look inside

    May I be able to find whatever lies within

    So I can eventually make an impression

    On the days I can’t even be with you

    Hon, you’ve got my mind wrapped up in sheets

    But if one day you will follow me 

    We could fill your liquid eyes

    I’ll be your guide

    If only you’ll travel with me

    Back to the depths of the ocean.

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    BDIsernhagen commented on Autumn sunlight

    06-05-2009

    honestly, I liked this poem, but for me it was a bit hard to follow... I like the line about "fillig your liquid eyes" beautiful!
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