Too High

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Too High

The chaos in my mind~
                                  my life~
                                            overwhelms.
                              Unbearable.
Confusion jabs at my soul~
                                 leaving bruises~
                                          causing reckless fantasy.
                         Unsubstantiated fear.
Momentarily on top of the world~
                                impulsively jumping~
                                           into the darkest pit.
                              Despair.
Non-existence.                                       Simplicity.

You've taken me too far above reality.
                              If I fall from this height~
                                                  I may not survive.

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harmony74 commented on Too High

07-31-2009

"if i fall from this high I might not survie"..I absolutely love your words..very creative by far! U do so well with your exspression : ) Well done indeed..I love love love it!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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