The things in Summer(Not as cheesy as it sounds)

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    The things in Summer(Not as cheesy as it sounds)

              I can see the tinted light,
    richer than liquid gold,
    pooling slowly across the trees,
    the grass and flowers all about,
    Wispy the world sways from side to side,
    the lighter mood becoming a necessity,

    I can see the air shimmer,
    a brilliant thougtful blue,
    the kind that makes you freeze,
    while in your mind it captivates you,

    The grass is stitched with diamonds,
    the air is muggy-fresh,
    thse things-it isn't hard to find them,
    You strive without them less. 

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    litilraven commented on The things in Summer(Not as cheesy as it sounds)

    09-23-2009

    Very beautiful! Brings a vivid picture. Well done!!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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