Living Grace

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    Living Grace

    Rising up from from the ground, it lifts its majesty above for all to envy,
    It grows wise as times wears on, a mute bystander to the world,
    But, also, as it reaches greedily for the crystal blue sky, it rears companions for its tired life,
    They cluster devoiringly on its steadfast branches, feeling all it feels and seeing all it sees,
    Until one day the sun is absent, and frigid breezes shake the branches,
    Ever slowly the silent leaves fall peacefully to the ground, Waving back and forth to its former nurterer in a gesture common to most yet uncommon in a vexing way,
    And as the wind howls the tree waves back,
    Until wistfully the leaves drift out of sight and onto the threshold of
    first life.

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    litilraven commented on Living Grace

    09-23-2009

    It sounds very beautiful, and I can picture what is happening...but I'm lost in the beginning, and throughout the poem as to what it's talking about. "What" is rising up from the ground? "What grows wise as time wears on? See what I mean? At no time do you ever mention what you are talking about. You take me through the actions beautifully...but Grace doesn't grow as a living thing, and I guess that's where I'm lost. You do have a beautiful way with your words however!!

    alaskawriter96

    09/25/2009

    litilraven thanks!! I love your comment its really constructive!! thanks for reading my poems-im guna go read some of urs now lol

    TheBean commented on Living Grace

    04-14-2009

    Can you add the poem about the orca?I LOVE THAT ONE!!!!

    TheBean commented on Living Grace

    04-10-2009

    alaskawriter96, this is Bean. i luv this poem!!!! HOW DO U DO THAT, WOMAN!!!! i rated some of your poems; can u rate some of mine??

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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