Obsessed

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    Obsessed

    I'm obsessed with a guy i love, that's just the way it is.
    I would do anything for him, my life is wholy his.
    So honestly you can't call me out, from the depth of my situation,
    when i say that my logic is why should i live, if he is not takin.
    I live to make him happy, i want to see him smile,
    surely it'd be worth my while, to condemn myself so as to make his life easier, to redeem him of a unwanted lover,
    But for now i'm far to greedy, the fact deeply displeases me,
    i don't have the generosity to let myself be deprived,
    But even though i covet him still without trying to give him light,
    Now i say my wistfull goodbye, readying for the date i die.

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    Dusty commented on Obsessed

    05-05-2009

    Very obsessed! I enjoyed reading.

    alaskawriter96

    07/14/2009

    Thank you Dusty!If u have any suggestions for my writing i would greatly appreciate it. I look forward to reading urs!

    TheBean commented on Obsessed

    04-14-2009

    Dude, really man......

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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