The Promise

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    The Promise
    The wind is blowing through the trees
    And a song is riding on the breeze.
    A song of life, a song of peace.
    A song of joy, a song of ease.

    A song where Spirit says to me,
    Be joyful, happy and be free.
    I will take care of all your needs.
    You need not fret, I'll sow the seeds.

    The seeds will blossom and soon will grow,
    Like beautiful flowers and a love aglow.
    A love for the ages, a love that is pure,
    A love that is guaranteed to endure.

    Just trust in me, I will not fail
    I'll send you love that will prevail.
    Just live in peace and you will see
    All will be well, I promise thee.

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    cliftondurant commented on The Promise

    07-08-2009

    great poem he will always keep his promise and thats a wonderful feeling love your work
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    wheelsal commented on The Promise

    06-28-2009

    This could be a prayer you wrote to soothe your bleeding heart. It works well as a song also. Good job.
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    blanket commented on The Promise

    06-10-2009

    Imagery is wonderful. I float on with you. Uplifting and calming and rhyme is methodical. 10+ on this one as well.
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    extrarib commented on The Promise

    05-31-2009

    Very nice heart felt poem. You shine through your poetry very nicely. I really enjoy reading your work.
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    lightcourier commented on The Promise

    05-01-2009

    nice and pleasant to read. thanks.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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