The Mountaintop Experience

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The Mountaintop Experience

There once was a man with pride
Who decided the highest mountain to climb,
But, only to receive his own glory
So he prepared for just the right time.

He located the mountain for his challenge
Alone, he made the trip in the dark night
The moon and stars covered by clouds
It was difficult to see without light.

Only a few feet from the top of his goal,
He slipped falling into the air with great force
Realizing what his fate may be
He wondered his final recourse.

All of a sudden, the rope pulls hard
His body swinging in the air so free
And in the stillness of the dark night,
The words came out, “Oh, please, God, help me.”

In an instant, a voice answers
A deep voice, yet loving and kind.
“What is it you want me to do?”
“Save me. Please send me your lifeline.”

“Do you really think I can save you?”
The question comes quickly in earnest.
“Yes, Lord, I believe that you can.”
“I need help to save me from this mess.”

“Then, cut the rope tied around your waist.”
In silence, the man took time to think.
“I can’t possibly do such a thing as that.”
“I’ll just hold on with all my strength.”

“We have found him,” the rescue team report.
The voice echoing across the mountain loud.
They discovered his body frozen
ONLY TEN FEET AWAY FROM THE GROUND.

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drewking commented on The Mountaintop Experience

08-17-2009

i like this one alot, really makes ya think... very well written..

ginga commented on The Mountaintop Experience

06-20-2009

A heart -wrenching and suspenseful peice. Nice work. ginga

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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