The Kindly Gardeners

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Devoted to the  kindergarten teachers @ ACCS!!

The Kindly Gardeners

Kindergarten is delightfully rewarding
Shaping those adolescent minds
Further to find the beauty of our language

Transmitting The blending of their creativity
With an artful preamble of a penmanship
And the love for the written word they have insured daily

Instilling the thrilling ability to comprehend
an arrangement of sounds Abounding in amazement
As the fundamental unit's Are set in their placement

Greeting the little mass
Combining into the structure of a class
Excited an array of diverse personalities become united

Though sporadically they fumble
On the numbers as they tumble
Settling deep into their memories
Absorbed for an unmeasurable upkeep

Elated with the effacement of unsophistication
Encouraging the birthing of the equation
Inner joy is ascending while the teachers
Are tending to this precious garden of kinship

Youthful smiles alight
With their blossoming plight 
To knowledge In all of it's wonder
Quickly being drawn under
These indicative pleasures
Transforming into life long treasures

Imparting wisdom a gift
That persistently endeavors

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HarverTomsson commented on The Kindly Gardeners

12-14-2010

You take poetic license with the word "adolescent." Unless you have a room full of Billy Madison's. LOL Good write of appreciation. Harv

optimistic commented on The Kindly Gardeners

06-28-2009

This poem holds its ground delicately pleasing you from each stanza great rhythme thru the poems it fits well, Good write.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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