I think I need the question

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  • Confusion

    I think I need the question
    Not always sure about my feelings
    Longing for something
    Never knowing just what it is
    Searching...........
    Searching..................
    No response it recalls

    Am I Trying to find an anwser without a question
    Puzzlement rules my moment
    Wandering,wondering
    What am I trying to find
    To much confusion roams through the mind

    Whats going on, can this problem be be solved?
    Is their relief when you don`t know quite what is wrong
    Just longing
    Searching..........................
    never really knowing why
    I rely to much on emotions to pass the time
    But it isn't my fault
    It is only one of my many my human defects
    Maybe it isnt the lack of a question
    In it's stead inferior aspect

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    PRober commented on I think I need the question

    07-18-2009

    I think you're very right, a good poem to a great one in fact! Nicely done...write on!
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    kdarcy commented on I think I need the question

    04-27-2009

    We all need the / a question, for what purpose would we have withot them? For me, I like the concept and many of the lines. It seems strained, could it be you are trying too hard? we all do it. I will look over some of your others and comment, thanks for sharing.
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    Tray4 commented on I think I need the question

    03-30-2009

    just rewrote this one, much improved I think.I did'nt change it to much but I believe those little details make all the difference
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    origionalmerlin commented on I think I need the question

    03-30-2009

    (advice to Virgo(s) Perfection is the goal, not the rule..) alone time gets you recharged, let the wheels spin till something important catches your fancy . good read, good write
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