Find freedom

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Find freedom

Let go of the hatred
It`s got you chained
So much anger causes so much hidden pain
like a disease it spreads to decay
left with a carcass of decomposed remains
Bitter and broken
The sickness seeps in
Meshing in paper thin skin
The torment intraps
Guile sets in
Spinning offenses begin
Your portrait becomes stained
Surely your hearts tears have rained

It`s a matter of choice
To roleplay or To choose abstain
Reaching for fools gold or the truth relaid

Forgiveness glorifies a new outlook
Rewriting the warped pages in your lifes book
Refurbishing the cover of a new lover
untangled ,thou still remaining stuborn
in this instance to discover
Strong willed and surely instilled
Love finds Freedom

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origionalmerlin commented on Find freedom

03-30-2009

absolutely accurate

xxlheart commented on Find freedom

03-18-2009

there that is better! 10 looks good on you :) btw, did i mention that i adore this poem?

xxlheart commented on Find freedom

03-18-2009

ugh, my computer is protesting my existence!! so if i get this working i shall give you a ten. until then you will have to imagine my rating of ten ~L~ good poem lady of troy. sincerely.mark

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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Pulse 2
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Candle Sticks 4
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Ready 1
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"Whole" 1
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