The Greatest Feeling

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    • CDWillams
    • I'm gonna be dumping random thangents, thoughts in my mind I just have to let out. I hope no one minds, but thoughts are poetry right?

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    I wrote this Valentine's Day a year ago, so off course the dates a tad off. Tell me what you think.

    The Greatest Feeling

    It's February now,
    Everyone's freaking out,
    But as ever, I seem numbed,
    Left in the dust and dumb,
    Whilst I twiddle my thumbs.

    Truth be told,
    I like when it's cold.
    I resist the drug of love,
    Shoo away the doves,
    And walk away.

    I brush off that cursed heavy dust,
    Keep away the sin of Lust,
    People keep asking,
    Truly appalled,
    Why my tears don't fall. 

    I say it's alright,
    My world's still bright,
    Life goes on, the sun still shines,
    No one know what I love the most,
    The feeling of me, being alone. 

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    Embraced commented on The Greatest Feeling

    10-04-2010

    What a great way to express liking the feeling of being by yourself. Very nice write. 10 from me.=) E~
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    CDWillams

    10/05/2010

    Thanks :D

    jj1562 commented on The Greatest Feeling

    10-04-2010

    Agread 100% sometimes the best time is times spent alone of a cool winter's hallow
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    CDWillams

    10/04/2010

    Thanks, a appreciate the support.

    Crush commented on The Greatest Feeling

    10-04-2010

    i am currently here as well. you have told a great story and i love the style.
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    CDWillams

    10/04/2010

    Thank you :D

    sk8erpoet commented on The Greatest Feeling

    10-04-2010

    great write dude.....it totally makes sense....cool....sk8
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    CDWillams

    10/04/2010

    Thanks sk8 :D

    ImStillHere commented on The Greatest Feeling

    10-04-2010

    "No one know what I love the most, The feeling of me, being alone."- i definatly know what you mean. but you know, its good to be with someone slightly tolerable. :) ~Audrey
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    CDWillams

    10/04/2010

    Yeah, I kind of wrote this when I was bitter and lonely. So of course hating everything was my agenda lol

    ImStillHere

    10/04/2010

    ahhhh i see... well BE HAPPEH! :D

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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