Excuse Me, I Broke My Heart
Excuse me,I broke my heart,
The feeling is bitter tart,
Every rose,
A thorn.
Every person,
Feels scorned.
But I feel torn,
Do I lay here,
In my sorrow?
Or get up,
To take tomorrow?
Excuse Me, I Broke My Heart
2 Comments
- CDWillams
- I'm gonna be dumping random thangents, thoughts in my mind I just have to let out. I hope no one minds, but thoughts are poetry right?
Poem Commentary
So anyway, we all know the heartbreak road..but how does it truly make us feel? Sad sure, but Walt Whitman cries to us "CARPE DIUM" thus causing my confusion. I want to cry but I must trek on.I broke my heart,
The feeling is bitter tart,
Every rose,
A thorn.
Every person,
Feels scorned.
But I feel torn,
Do I lay here,
In my sorrow?
Or get up,
To take tomorrow?
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Poem Comments
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Krystle commented on Excuse Me, I Broke My Heart
07-15-2011
- Very smooth and deep! Love the emotion in this piece! Very well done!!
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07/18/2011
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Ninjaboy commented on Excuse Me, I Broke My Heart
10-04-2010
- very nice and easy to read... qucik too......Ninja
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10/04/2010
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