The day I saw myself in the mirror

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    I said 3 feet maybe 4 feet lol,, i wasnt that big! I think i was the average height that a 3 or 4 year old would be. :)

    The day I saw myself in the mirror

    Well, there I stood, I guess I was about 3 foot 8 maybe 4 feet,
    Plenty of blood moving and a sound heartbeat,
    I stood looking at what I thought could not be true,
    No! I thought, this is worse than anything I ever knew,
    Kids often teased me and called me ugly, but I never believed it to be true,
    I always thought that yeah you know, im a little on the side that says attraction,
    Upward on the scale, never a fraction,

    Below that of pretty, also known as ugly,
    But the mirror had a truth, one that made me feel bruised,like a game of rugby,
    I looked and was horrified, I instantly knew that average was as far as I could go,
    Nothing I could do, nothing there to show,
    But I wouldnt give up, I had plenty of fight,
    I would be handsome with all my might,

    I tried shifting my face, twisting it in every way I could,
    I tried pulling my face off in the hopes that the real, more attractive one would,
    Show up and put up a exhausted smile on my face,
    But no, nothing could change the face,
    That I would have to get accustomed to for years to come,
    Saddened I tried a last resort, a final sum,

    I stood perfectly still, closed my eyes and wished it away,
    Hoping that it would be a different me, a different face, looking back at me that day,
    I squinted my eyes as tight as I could,
    Gave it all I had, I even knocked on wood,
    But when I opened them it was the same face, nothing more,
    Except painful eyes and tears that rolled from my face to the floor.

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    Sorealpoet commented on The day I saw myself in the mirror

    08-16-2009

    Babyboi again i say to you know who you are and who made you. If God made you then yuo are beautifully and wonderously made. I like it though, but I can sympathize and relate to yuo on many levels and i've learned that many things that happened back in my yojnger days have affected me to this very day, but yuo can't alow them to over take you and kill your hunger and yuor desire to fight and to survivie.

    KING

    08/18/2009

    It doesnt. Im driven beyond measure. As a poet however, that pain is an expression of how i felt then. Do i feel that way today. Not so much. Perhaps here and there because lets face it, im human, but my desire to become great is greater than the scars ive suffered in the early years of my life.

    KING

    08/18/2009

    Another way to look at is if i dont express what i felt, how then can i be free of it? What better way to tell the story than through the gift i recieved in poetry. The can be said of all of my poems. They are an expression of who i am, or what i am feeling at a particular time.

    Perianpoint commented on The day I saw myself in the mirror

    06-16-2009

    You underlined the painfully, distorted mentality of self-worth as conceived nurtured from physical attractiveness. This viewpoint is fostered by a stylized subculture and promoted via multi-media. The narrow mindset unfortunately leaves the psyche scarred, whereby the divine beauty of genetic individuality never aspires to fullest potential. Beautifully written and inspired. Elysian.

    Gizina commented on The day I saw myself in the mirror

    11-17-2008

    That is so sad! I like it,though I hope you don't really feel that you are ugly!..?

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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