In Heat: Summer Lust

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This poem is about a specific moment i had in looking at a girl my age when i was a teenager

In Heat: Summer Lust

In Heat: Summer Lust   30   Lines

There she was, summer love, a specimen still in development but the look of a female in her prime,
As far as I was concerned she was ripe and ready, just in time,
She wore the superman T-shirt that made her boobs push forward,
The 15 year old boy I was then squirmed,
Luckly there werent any lessons learned,
I dont think id know what to do if we actually had a moment or two together to get physical,
But at the time her body just seemed mystical,
They tell you that in your teens your hormones go out of control at times,
In the moment I studied this girl, I am certain to have committed in the mind, lustful crimes,

She was only 16 then, who can imagine what shed become in later days,
I wondered as I sat on the bus ride back from the beach anyways,
The erection would leave much as it would have ben nice to subside,
Though in my mind it was the secret that would be hid on the that ride,
Fo who knows what shame I would have gained from the other boys and girls who saw,
That I was harder than a rock from the mightiest waterfall,
And they would know it would be from the girl with the S on her chest,
With buxom legs and succulent breast,
For I was not alone in this lust, quest,
About 4 or 5 more boys shared the same jest,
Anyway, I ramble, the point is done,
I just wanted to share what I percieve now as teenage fun.

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