The best of Me

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    The best of Me

     The best of me is all I have,
    at a young age that is all I can show,
    there is some things I just cant know,
    believe me though I am smart.


    The best of me is all I have,
    you can take me as I am,
    or leave and get no better,
    believe me though I am good.


    The best of me is all I have,
    see me through your eyes,
    or from anyone elses,
    believe me though I am beautiful.

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    Tyme commented on The best of Me

    04-19-2011

    I like that you like to see yourself as the best you. Many highlight and magnify the darker and worst part of themselves. Though we are both, it is what we focus on that we become more of. I'm glad you seem to focus on the positive.
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    dumplin commented on The best of Me

    10-09-2009

    Nice confidence! It's good to love oneself. should have used are instead of is, though.
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    KagenoKitsune commented on The best of Me

    10-09-2009

    this is very good peom and i like it very much. i too am not seen as what i am because my body is young. i relate very much to yours poem
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    optimistic commented on The best of Me

    06-05-2009

    The best is your best. Congrads on showing it this is an outstanding poem and if read in public great job.
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    Kelstorm commented on The best of Me

    06-05-2009

    I love your self declaration. Keep yourself strong like that and don't allow the world around you to make you feel less. Seeing such a work in someone so young makes me happy to read it. Continue to live and be your true note.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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