FEELINGS

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FEELINGS

theres life in water
theres life on land
theres love above
above the cold world
that i cannot understand

You want me to stay
you want me to go
but i make the final decisions
for now on i am laying low

I cant stand not hating you
I cant stand not liking you.

The things that were said.
The things that we did
could never compare
what i felt towards you

I moved on though
I see you walk the halls
though i look away
i dont know what to feel
 
the end of us is near
to all who understand
it is OVER.


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Tyme commented on FEELINGS

04-19-2011

I wish i could like this 5 times over. Your opening stanza is so profound. There is soooo much jam-packed and crammed; stuffed in that statement! "I cant stand not hating you I cant stand not liking you." This is an unusual line in that most people feel bad for hating people. Here, this person is mad at themselves for actually liking someone! This is good. Keep writing.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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