My day so far 10am

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    My day so far 10am

    Wake up
    LATE
    feeling great
    got dressed in some sweats
    still feeling great
    got in the car feeling flustered
    had to talk to a garbage man cause
    my family has issues
    i mean issues
    thats another poem
    though
    its deep
    like a cut
    but thats another poem
    going on
    got to school
    now im feeling great
    out the house
    THANK GOD
    got to my second home
    BAND ROOM
    my (band mom) emily chapman
    things were going well
    then she read an email
    skip boyer died
    bless his soul
    i didnt know him well
    but still that cuts deep, very deep (another poem)
    Anyway math class was a but i got an answer right though
    Plus 10 brownie points
    english was a drag like always and now im here
    in HISTORY
    thinking about my love (another poem)
    DONE.

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    MATRE commented on My day so far 10am

    01-15-2012

    i recall waking up looking forward to the day ahead.perhaps it was money that i knew i was gonna make r some good food i was bout to eat.the best was going home to my lovely girlfriend until she acted unlovey.either way waking up a new day is great
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    Tyme commented on My day so far 10am

    04-19-2011

    This has the whirlwind feel of constant rushed motion. I like the pace and the "that's another poem" repetition. Whimsical, fun and a good read. Glad you got your brownie points, now go wipe your nose!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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