Giving up

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Giving up

Sick of crying
tired of trying
yeah im smiling
but inside im dying

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Tyme commented on Giving up

04-19-2011

It's what happens when our hope is deferred. It makes the heart sick.

kpeery09 commented on Giving up

03-15-2010

Very Nice, its short and straight to the point. I give you 10

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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