Impulse/one less

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Impulse/one less

Cut my wrists and bleed to death,
no reason to love if there is none left;
you have to hurt to pass the test,
you have to die to beat the rest,
now your dead and one less....

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Tyme commented on Impulse/one less

04-19-2011

Dark. This really leaves one feeling empty. Effective.

kpeery09 commented on Impulse/one less

03-15-2010

It seems like you've had quite alot of troubles in your past to make you think this way of suicide. But it made a good poem. I give you 10

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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