still thinking of you

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    still thinking of you

    i cant feel my body
    i only wish it were my soul
    i took ten like candy
    hopeing it all would end
    only if it could do to my mind and heart
    as it dose my arms and legs
    i wanted you off my mind
    and to just not feel the pain
    i would give anything to just not be me
    to not love you so much knowing you love her
    i dont want to think about it day after day
    i dont wanna feel this ache deep in my heart
    i dont want to feel my tears as they fall
    so i took ten like candy
    hoping it would finally end it all
    i took ten
    and i didnt feel my fall
    but as my body went numb
    and i laid there and died
    it was still you that crossed my mind

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    cocoon1951 commented on still thinking of you

    05-21-2009

    The pain goes deep, I know. When love comes to an end. Never close the book, The next chapter may show A new begginning!!!
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    silentcries

    06/23/2009

    thanks i really like "never close the book" its a good figure of speech

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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