leaving my burrdens at the door

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leaving my burrdens at the door

dear god
i just dont know if i can do it anymore
life is getting to me
and im strugglin
just tryin to keep my head afloat
tryin to do right and keep up hope
but i dont know how much longer i can
stand this rocky boat
they say you dont give us more then we can handle
well right now  i got ten weights on my back
tryin hard to hold me back
and worse i got twenty on my mind
tryin to pull me down all the time
so here i am knocking at your door
lettin you know i cant do this anymore
i need strength lord
i'm getting weak
please help me get where i need to be
get my mind right
and help me fly striaght
cuz right now i couldn't even get my feet off the ground
dear god i'm here
please help your child
im hurting and i need some healing
i just dont know if i can do it anymore
love your child
just trying to leave my burrdens at the door

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blueberry commented on leaving my burrdens at the door

02-13-2010

I know how that can feel at times. But it's best to be wise and leave your burdens behind, have faith, and keep your head up. Nice poem.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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