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    him

    he manipulates her mind
    he twist her thoughts
    he cheats and lies
    he says things that makes her wanna cry
    she wants to leave
    yet she always stays
    tries to make him happy
    and give him love in every way she knows
    she loves him so much
    and cares for him so
    yet inside sometimes
    he makes her feel as if she should just die
    he's killing her inside
    she tries to stay strong
    for he is her first love
    and the only one who has ever been inside
    she'd do anything for him
    yet he dosen't notice
    or dosent care
    he is murdering her
    and she could get away
    yet in her mind he'll always stay
    so she just dries her eyes from all her cries
    sticks it out
    loves him still
    as he kills whats left of her
    she can only dream to be free
    that one day he'll stop
    and relize he loves her just as she loves him
    and treat her right
    until that day she'll cry and die silently
    and in love with
    her murderer






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    dreamadaily4 commented on him

    09-02-2009

    I read all your poems. They are very depressing and painful. I appreciate your style. I just pray these are fictional and not a glimpse into your life. 19 is too young to feel such despair. If it is girl, RUN! Get away from the type of guys you normally fall for and seek someone you can confide in to help you sort this out now. I don't want your life to continue on this path. If it's all just writing, then forget the above and GREAT JOB! :)

    silentcries

    09/14/2009

    thanks for taking time and reading my poems and yes the poems are about my life and i do have a lot of pain in it but dont get me wrong i try to live life to the fullest and be happy with all the blessings i do have

    prophesy commented on him

    02-16-2009

    was married 20ys. i feel your pain. you must go through it to young love. never let a man nor woman sculpture who u are. where were u before u met this love? pls return/the poet

    silentcries

    06/23/2009

    damn 20 yrs? what happend? if u dont mind me asking. . and before i met him i was just a kid

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    silentcries’s Poems (20)

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