Setting in Hollow

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My heart is a tattered pain of emptiness.

Setting in Hollow

My heart is empty
All alone
In a small mess

I used to love
Everyone i saw

But my voice
Began to leave

And my eyes
Began to fade

I was dying
Slowly and surely

They stopped listening
Forgetting me

All alone
Am I

They left me
To die slowly

They thought I was sad
Too sad to speak

My heart became hollow
As empty
As the day I was born
With no one to save me
Or even to hear me

My heart is as hollow
As the setting sun
Is beautiful

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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