Seperate ways

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    Seperate ways
    What is a man supposed to do,
    when his heart is shredded through?
    Fight for a prize he shall never win,
    or walk away and face being condemned?

    What do I have to do or say,
    to lift your eyes, make you look my way?
    And how do I make myself let you go,
    to live your life, and learn all you will know?

    Vision becomes so blurred, storm surges are starry,
    all my stuttering, and I cant find any words better than "I'm sorry".
    So what is a man to do during the days,
    his heart and soul take thier seperate ways?

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    NitaBoo commented on Seperate ways

    02-09-2011

    I love this! Excellent thought put into this and a fabulous query it presents to the readers mind...
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    simoneaugustus commented on Seperate ways

    03-06-2010

    The last line made me want to weep! I have several of your poems listed as my favorites, but I think I love this one the most. So poignant, emotional, achingly beautiful. You are truly talented!
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    randa commented on Seperate ways

    04-02-2009

    this really touch my heart feel like me
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    caspiancri commented on Seperate ways

    03-16-2009

    nice flow
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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