Reprieve

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    Reprieve

    Reprieve

    The spirit was not quelled

    The mind's eye shined like Polaris

    The physical was supple

    And then

    The glares and stares subtly

    Turned into callous indifference

    As the ascent became the descent

    Mercurial thoughts flood my brain

    Filling me with fear

    Peace alternates with panic

    Like a seesaw balancing on the shimmering thread of life

    With care I prepare to dare to submit

    To the bleak blackness of eternity

    But once again before I touch the depths of darkness

    I soar to the heavens like a golden swan

    To my castle in the sun

    On reprieve I wait for my final plunge

    by Antoinette

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    Plot121 commented on Reprieve

    04-01-2009

    I think you have alot of great description here but I think the core message is somewhat lost. I liked the flow and the spelling was great but the core message was somewhat hazy

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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