The Secret

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    The Secret


    Like the shattering of glass

    The fragmented pieces

    Of my consciousness strive to congeal

    Whispering haunts the hollow of my heart

    The message is unclear

    And yet in my moment of solitude

    I know the answer,

    I understand the secret of the universe

    But only for a fleeting moment

    by Antoinette


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    kdarcy commented on The Secret

    08-18-2010

    A nice read, to understan a secret for a moment is a great thing, thanks
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    kenparme commented on The Secret

    04-01-2009

    Short active and powerful-very good poem.
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    JadedJezzabel commented on The Secret

    03-29-2009

    gave this a 10.....excellent. you know we live in the same city?
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    janetdawson commented on The Secret

    03-26-2009

    very good , you gave a great talent
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    CV commented on The Secret

    03-26-2009

    The answer has to be...unattainable?
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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