"Crazy"

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"Crazy"

Dazed and confused,
As I try to figure out,
What everything’s supposed to mean,
What’s it all about?

Locked inside these walls,
I still sit here all alone,
Fighting not to go in sane,
Afraid of the unknown.

Lost my way, no turning back,
How did I get here?
Downward spiral, pit of hell,
Whom is it I shall fear?

Lost in thought, the fight begins,
I struggle to break free,
Prisoner of my own damn mind,
For which there is no key.

Schizophrenic, paranoid?
No one seems to know,
All these voices in my head,
Why won’t they just go?

With each new day more slips away,
It’s harder to hold on,
I’m letting go to stop the pain,
Reality is gone…





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Kaiprin commented on "Crazy"

12-23-2009

Nicely done. Loneliness at its worst is devastating, giving your mind time to reflect in ways that are not always healthy. Good write.

faerienik28

12/23/2009

Again, thank you. I enjoy your feedback.

Grito commented on "Crazy"

03-28-2009

A down spout against the grain of positivity.

Bewitchments commented on "Crazy"

03-02-2009

Been there read mine, very good poem

magicmanzz commented on "Crazy"

02-09-2009

nice job i enjoyed it amensenly

Phoenix9 commented on "Crazy"

11-28-2008

well written, not sane or insane just unsane.you are the key.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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