"Empty"

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  • Angst

    "Empty"

    Bleeding heart,
    Blood falls like rain,
    Tortured soul,
    Can’t stop the pain.
    Lost in grief,
    There’s no way out,
    Shattered dreams,
    And endless doubt.
    Fading hope,
    Expanding fears,
    Undying prayers,
    For unending tears.
    Surrounded by darkness,
    Sheltered by pain,
    Nowhere to turn,
    And nothing to gain.
    Everything lost,
    Where did you go wrong?
    When all hope is gone,
    Where do you belong?

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    Kaiprin commented on "Empty"

    12-23-2009

    I like how this work is open to many different interpretations. Acceptance too is aptly touched upon by your unique blend of wording.

    faerienik28

    12/23/2009

    Thank you for that. A rare being who actually understands poetry...lovely.

    kenparme commented on "Empty"

    11-29-2008

    Very good poem but I am not sure you should have added that last verse-just an opinion.

    Phoenix9 commented on "Empty"

    11-28-2008

    very good

    JazzyChic commented on "Empty"

    11-24-2008

    excellent write..

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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