Ponderance: Reactions

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    • is doin some Solitary Thinkin-- Lee Ann Womack

    Ponderance: Reactions

    Amid all the stars and the changing effects
    The sun, the moon, the cosmos
    I lay listening to the whispers of design
    a pattern, a feeling of presence divine

    What one day brings lays the foundation for another
    step by step a reaction to eachother
    Connections between loves oceans afar
    meaningless now is the distance between lovers

    Does one swift movement of a butterfly's wings
    send whispers through the wind?
    Creating that medium between two souls
    Or is it the cause of all our sins?

    What was, we call past
    it's what we currently know
    discovered for us,
    how do we grow?

    Once a creature of time, a feeling so sublime
    My spirit waivers at the weight of time
    I do not know the future
    I cannot feel the past
    the present always open
    to the heat of an attack.

    The cause of my heart's palpitation
    I wonder what keeps the rhythm.
    Time's omnipresent hands
    or the free will of my system.

    Causes of the reactions
    Could be any force divided
    or maybe it's the course we assume
    and nothing's undecided.




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    galileo commented on Ponderance: Reactions

    07-23-2009

    wow... i agree with mk man. you did a great job! i wish i would have wrote it lol

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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