Once

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    Once

    Once when I was little I asked a woman to marry

    and flee with me to a castle I would build for her.

    She laughed and said she would, but wanted

    to know if I was any good at making castles for damsels

    such as she, for I was only four or three.

     

    I said I was and that her house would be made of

    solid brick, with walls “this thick” extending my

    little arms their widest length. She giggled,

    claimed I was cute and that I surely had the strength.

    She said she'd wait for me, though I was only four or three,

    and be my wife for all her life; so gallant and cute

    a boy I was.

     

    The next day I went home and found just one brick.

    I didn't promise her a castle made of stick!

    It's been thirty-six years since that day.

    In my mind I've built castle after castle

    but they've all washed away.

    I've dreamed of queens and I've dreamed of loves

    but they have all been dreams

    of what never was.

    (Need I say it?  Copyright 2009.)

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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    Russian Composers 1
    Song of a Spiritual Agnostic 12
    If You 8
    Once 1
    Paging You 2
    I Have a Ficus 3
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    Soft Regret (Anna's Song 1
    Conversations with Myself 6
    Nebulous v. Cumulous 1
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