Anna's Song

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    Anna's Song

    Anna's song


    Anna's eyes, with arched eyebrows,

    speak of wonder, laughter, sorrow, sympathy, and surprise;

    according to her mood and guise.

     

    Her olive skin and dimpled, pointed chin

    remark beneath a gown of straight, long hair

    cascading down below her slender shoulders

    that are tanned but not as brown

    as what rests there:

    which is dark as all the mysteries of history

    and more sensual than all the romances written.

     

    Her legs and limbs are long and elegant;

    she moves like a swan in its element.

    Her breasts, chest, thighs and hips

    would cause sailor's to lose control of their ships

    and drown beneath the waves of lust;

    their last striving, the gurgled words: “I must!”-

    as they clutch for her and sink to dust.

     

    As perfect pi makes mathematicians

    laugh until they cry,

    God's calculations for her smile

    make all men pause for more than a little while

    to reflect and wish that that smile could be kept

    on a chain, or in a dish, to help them when they feel down;

    or when they seek a queen to wear their crown.

     

    But she is not a bauble, figurehead, painting, or anything

    else that could be maintained for the sake of beauty

    or desire.

    She's invested with the spirit of life

    and has a natural fire

    that burns sweetly and brightly;

    but, like a fire, can only be fed and nurtured;

    like a fire she must be respected;

    like a fire she can't be expected

    to live for another,

    without air and freedom - but just a lover

    as her fuel.

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    irreverent commented on Anna's Song

    01-12-2011

    This is a very beautiful Ode. You prose is excellent and the imagery and metaphors are exquisite.

    rsalassi commented on Anna's Song

    07-21-2010

    I rarely read, much less like, chick poems, but this one is so nicely written I just wanted to say how much I like it. It reminds me of Hepburn/Kelley's lines from The Philadelphia Story/High Society about NOT being a cold, beautiful statue, worshipped and admired from afar, but a hot-blooded beauty needing to be touched and loved up close. Great write!

    vincenzo commented on Anna's Song

    06-08-2010

    She's invested with the spirit of life and has a natural fire that burns sweetly and brightly but. a like fire, can only be fed and nutured; like a fire she must be respected; like a fire she can't be expected to live for another.... These are rich (poetic) devices from a rich (in quality ideas) poet... wish I could weave a conundrum of thoughts like these. I was enthralled all through the reading... nice one. Vin

    ginga commented on Anna's Song

    03-17-2010

    Congo, This is so full of joy, beauty and rapture. For a moment it seemed Romeo was speaking of his Juliet. A very titillating piece. ginga

    jademelissa74 commented on Anna's Song

    03-05-2010

    I have really enjoyed this line..."but just a lover as her fuel." The passionate statements about Anna are so vivid and warm. I love the descriptions of her beauty...A great piece!

    CongoNetherland

    03/05/2010

    Thanks!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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