Not close at all

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    • Amber041792
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    This just happened by me giving my opinion to my sister and it blew up in my face. My mother ended up calling me to tell me to not start anything when I was only having a conversation. I should have known my sister was going to run to mommy and tell on me. This is what came out of it.

    Not close at all

    You wonder why I'm not close, to you or to my siblings. You wonder why I do or say the things I do. That is because I'm not afraid to be who I am. Although he and she are my brother and sister doesn't mean I have anything in common with any of them. We share the same blood and genes, but in reality we don't know any of us. None of you know any of my secrets, my mistakes, my deepest darkest secret. We don't know any one. I don't know you and you don't know me. That is why I'm not close to you and you are not close to me and we do not intend to be. I know that isn't good because when I try to give my opininon or have a conversation with any of you, you go and tell on me just to get me in trouble like a little baby. You have no idea how much I love not being close to you or anyone, it just means that my secrets, my mistakes, my deepest darkest secret will be safe from all of you.

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    Rhymer commented on Not close at all

    10-18-2010

    Emotional and vivid write, expressing your stance well.................

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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