For the night

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  • Amber041792
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I read a poem that had some desire in it and it got me thinking. I've never really wrote a poem with some sort of disire or some sort of that so I thought why not? This is what I got =)

For the night

The night started with a dance, an innocent touch. It turned into something like fire. The burning sense on the inside of my lower stomach. The feeling got more intense as you traced my body with your fingertips. The sensations when you touched my lips with yours, our bodies mingling together, skin against skin. I know this feeling and what we are doing is bad, against the morals, but right now it feels like the right thing. I know I shouldn't, but as of right now I can't think straight with you holding me like that. Maybe this will only happen for the night and I'll never have to think about the way you taste every again, but some part of me wants to remember and physically know what you feel like, feel your heart beat faster, everyday.

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FranzJ commented on For the night

09-22-2010

it has alot of desire from an eighteen year old - keep up the good work

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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